THIS IS JUST A PREVIEW.
I want to know what you guys think of it and what I should add next. 
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a few things to say:
You should change the counting in sheet 2. it’s really strange and too hard to follow, which is never good.
you should consider not making everything a half note. it just sounds weird.
Also, on the last section, it doesn’t flow well. I don’t know why, just see if you can fix it.
Counting?
Half Note seemed to blend well and created a cool effect.
Flow well?
Half notes sometimes sound good together, not in something this slow.