Rocking 2

my second song with metal guitar


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Too random. Metal Guitar doesn’t sound good when it’s high pitched. There are so many things wrong with this.


This song is fine.


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The big problem is that nothing blends… The metal guitars feel fragmented and are placed too high by themselves, the drums are too attached to the best and don’t change, I can barely hear the bass… You have a sense of musicality, but there’s nothing to hook or catch a listener’s attention. Experimentation helps here, as long as you don’t do experimentation a la Timothy Verbist where you upload your entire library of composition.

There’s always room to improve!