Hungry Beast

The first song I made with notessimo. It’s very simple, but whatever. Plz, let me know what you think. What’s good, what’s bad? If you want to do anything with this song, plz first ask me.

If you want critisism, you should post your song in the songs forum. Maybe in the rock song thread or the random song thread?

The main problem with it though is structure. Make sure your song has verses/choruses like a real song!

I know, but this is not a serious song. I just made it when I was bored. And this is the first time I post a song.