Roastmasters: New song 11/2 Industrial Revolution

Notessimo Maestro
#101

I can’t stop listening to Rise of Credence.

#102

I got more tabs srry for crowding your forum
240bpm
x2

E--------------------------------------------------------------------------
B--------------------------------------------------------------------------
G-------------------------------------------------------------------------
D-------------------------------------------------------------------------
A--------1------------------1-----------1------------------0h1h2
E—000------2—1—000-1----2—000-----2—1—000-1-----------

E--------------------------------------------------------|--------------
B--------------------------------------------------------|--------------
G-------------------------------------------------------|---------------
D-------------------------------------------------------|---------------
A-------1-----------------1-----------1-----------|---------1----
E–000-----2—1—000-1------2—000-----2—1— |000-1------2
alternate ending (use if not playing with drum part)
E--------------------------
B--------------------------
G-------------------------
D-------------------------
A--------------111-------
E–000–111-------222–

x4 (use alternate ending 2nd 4th times)

E----------------------------- | ---------- | ----------
B----------------------------- | ---------- | ----------
G----------------------------- | ---------- | ----------
D----------------------------- | ---------- | ----------
A----------------------------- | ---------- | ----------
E–0-0-0-0-2-2-1-1-0-0-0-0 | -2-1-1-0- | -3-2-2-1

150bpm
x2

E-------------------------------------------------
B-------------------------------------------------
G-------------------------------------------------
D-------------------------------------------------
A-------22----11------------22----11-------
E-1–12—332----221001–12—332----22122

#103

AWESOME CHOICE. IF I WERE TO GET ADDICTED TO A SONG I’D CHOOSE THAT ONE TOO

[http://www.chordbook.com/guitarchords.php](http://www.chordbook.com/guitarchords.php)

check yourself, the tab is kind of inaccurate

#104

i would use that but I don’t have a guitar

im gonna get one in a couple weeks so im practicing

#105

ALSO NEW SONG GO GO GO CRITISICM

AND A TAB TO GO WITH IT
Sheet 0

E-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
B-2~2~24~~~~~
G-3~1~X----------------------1~~~~~~~~~~~~~
D----------------------------------------------------4~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~x-----------------------
A---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
E---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- x2

Sheet 3

E----------4------2------1–2–1------2-----4-----------1------
B-2---------------------------------------------------4-----------
G-----------------------------------------------------------------
D------------------------------------------------------------------
A------------------------------------------------------------------
E-------------------------------------------------------------------

E-----0------0-----0-----0------------------------------------------------
B–2–2–2–2–2–2–2–2–2-------4------2------4-------2--------------
G----------------------------------1-------------1--------------------------
D-----------------------------------------4--------------4------------------
A---------------------------------------------------------------------------
E---------------------------------------------------------------------------

Random solo in sheet 3

E------------1~~-----------------------------------------
B----0h2h4------4p1-4p1–1----------------------------
G–1-----------------------3–3-1-----------------------
D-----------------------------------4-2------------------
A--------------------------------------------------------
E--------------------------------------------------------

#106

As i said in the techno forum…except in better words

THIS SONG IS KICKASS!!! too bad that is an understatement your not going to see my type that very often in this forum so consider it means its really high up there lol

Strange everytime i listen to On The Moon…i kinda feel the urge to cry

Hopefully ill get to see more techno out of you

#107

Now how does that work? The word “cry” and a laugh emote don’t belong in the same sentence.

Now onward with your new song:

Pretty damn good. Smooth transitions, catchy melodies (the one near the end was very beautiful) and an effective bass.

Here’s a bit of criticism: There are occasional ugly notes (like near the end) that pop up, and I didn’t find the techno bass #1 section as brilliant as the rest of the piece. Also, more diversity in the percussion would be great (it’s still pretty fucking awesome). But that’s just me nit-picking. Overall, your new song is pretty awesome. 5/5

#108

one of the best songs on this site but the ending sucks change it NAO!!!

#109

I loved pretty much the whole song. It was a very different use of instruments for you, with the same amount of epicness however. It reminded me of a Megaman tune, and I love those. The only things I found wrong were that the drums were a bit too powerful during the solo/whatever is on sheet 31. And the last 3 chords of the song for the synth nearly made my ears bleed. Too high and too wierd. And the last sheet was out of place too. I think you could have done a better job on that part.

Overall: 4.7/5

Fabulous.

EDIT: As of 6/30/10, I’m am editing this post.

Overall: 4.9/5

#110

when you were mine was so much better than any other of your songs. its in a whole different league.

#111

“On the Moon” was AMAZING! I loved the echo effect, and I was glad that an Uber Drummer like you paid so much attention to the notes. The only thing I was dissapointed about was that the ending felt like a bit of a rip-off. Other than that, I enjoyed it quite a lot. Keep it comin’!

#112

I don’t understand the hate for the ending. Just think, how else can you possibly end the tale of a man experiencing an epic journey on the moon? BY CUTTING OFF HIS OXYGEN. My goal here with the last few sheets was to capture your attention with a few good melodies and then throw it back at you at 1000MPH. Why would I do that? Because I can.

#113

Have I said it was epic? No? Yeah, twas epic.

#114

Well now your ending makes. It sucks because having no air to breath does too. By making it bad, you made it good. I see what you did there.

#115

Yup, its just the rules of art… and if that rule didn’t exist than this painting wouldn’t have sold as the most expensive painting in history at $300 million

#116

I’m still waiting for you to ship that.

#117

And I’m still waiting for you to pay your shipping and handling fees.

#118

You said you’d waive those fees if I sent you my social security number and bank account number.

WERE YOU LYING TO ME?

#119

Yes

Be sure to lock your door tonight

#120

glockspiel=xylophone hero!!! lol
and i loved it!