Rocken’ Cannon: in my opinion, doesn’t really need much improvement. One suggestion: the guitar part on sheet 8 is so low it’s distorted. Try bringing it up an octave or using a different instrument. Also, it gets rather repetitive once you stop adding new sheets. That in itself isn’t really a problem, as it’s a well composed song, but you may want to see if anything can be done to reduce the repetition.
Atention in Kombat: overall, well made. Assuming that this is based on the Mortal Kombat theme, the main line is a little slow, with the rhythm slightly off. I don’t think you have enough notes put in.
Teraphorm: I really like this piece. The only real problem that I find with it is that the instant the drum section starts, the percussion completely overpowers the melody. You might try using the same rhythm, but with a reduced volume.
00eleven: pretty well put together, but too repetitive, especially at the beginning and end. Also, some of the trumpet notes are held for too long and distort the next note or two. Try shorting them to avoid overlapping.
Robot Rock our Way: good start, but need to put in the drum solo intro, and keep the drum beat going throughout the song. Also, your rhythm is a little off in some parts. It may do you good to listen to the song as you compose, if you aren’t already doing so.
Overall, songs are well made with good melodies. From what I can see, your main issues are rhythm and note length, both of which are easily fixed.
Wow, thats a lot of songs! Ive only listened to 3.,halo sad rock, Dreams, and unknown enitity. I liked the first 2 and then the
Uknown entity I didnt like so much (mainly the opening) Im about to listen to the rest, so keep up the good work.
I really liked the songs that I listened to. They were Rockaria, Code Lyoko, Unable to Manage, and Attention in Kombat.
I make custom Guitar Songs through a complicated process in which I place the notes in sync with the mp3 of the song, and I have selected Attention in Kombat to be on Guitar Hero! Well not the actual GH series, my own custom Guitar Hero. Well anyway, I really liked your songs.
i dont know why, but i felt the urge to change this around. I made Pachabel’s rock different. i made it more complicated, and probably tripled the note count. I massivley changed around the bass pedal, jazzed up the melody, and made a bass part. i will say, your songs are fun to make bass parts to, and change it up.
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