Great song, I thought it was sortof mechanical-factory-ish. (I thought the beginning rather sounded like machine-type sounds) I liked the Bass #4’s a lot, they were subtle yet made a good background and were kinda catchy. I couldn’t hear the voxes that well though, they seemed to flit in and out of the rest but I know they were at maximum volume so there wasn’t enough you could do about that. Also I couldn’t properly distinguish the chorus (if there was one). All in all an interesting catchy piece, 4.5/5
Welcome back Tyberious. And Yeah I have that dilemma a lot, i make a great riff on guitar, come over here and it sounds horrible. You just gotta keep trying till you get it right.
As for this song, I can’t really see how it could sound much better, as it was really good, I even loving the title! My only qualm is the vox. Which of course probably sounds better IRL. But I did love sheets 7 and 8, so it’s wasn’t bad.
Oh…just got to the ending…well can’t say much because it just breaks off…oh well.
Gah I still gave it a four star. seems I can’t find the five star button on songs I review. But I hope everyone listens to this song, it’s great and I will be featuring it.
Inside sounding like a B-side track, a rarity if you will. We need more of those, well done.
Also, I believe you still owe me a track titled “The The”
… so get to work on that one.
Oh… you’ve shifted up your naming paradigm… do it anyway.
yea. idk why i kept the ending that way, guess i just wanted to get a song out there 
im not very patient
It has been a very long time since I posted a new song with all my computer troubles and composer’s block and other stuff, but here you go. I also have another good one in the works. Thank you for your patience