Unfinished Songs / Demos

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Well now.
I decided to try a more kind of folk/Flogging Molly kind of song and its ok I guess, it’s not really that impressive pretty much the best thing is that I managed to make a decent beat with only conga #2 and a tom. Had no idea what to call it, like most of my songs. I might have it finished tomorrow, only depends on if you want to hear more of it, and if you don’t too bad and if you do that’s great.

Whadya guys think (im still workin’ on it) Glad is an acappela group (did i spell that right?)

This is my first cover.

Here is another

I think I want to do more on it… Should I?

I hope this gets noticed over all the spamXD
Oh wellz. I made this beat today and thought it sounded pretty cool even though its sort of minimalistic. The focus is obviously on the beat but i actually rather like the bassline as well. Im curious to know what you guys think of it:)

https://www.notessimo.net/?id=90768

Apparently the /notessimo thing is acting like a retard, so here is a link instead

[http://www.notessimo.net/viewtopic.php?f=90928&t=90768](http://www.notessimo.net/viewtopic.php?f=90928&t=90768)

Oh, look, my favourite thread. It’s back.

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Yes! :) Here I posted many of my unfinished covers xD

http://www.notessimo.net/page/browse/songs.html/_/notessimo2/unfinished-song-r67038

Feedback plox!

Hi Kam.

So uh seems like you sure love opening your songs with chords nowadays. It’s okay just you should probably introduce a melody or something interesting earlier. Try to see if you could get that (a melody) into somewhere like sheet 6. Also, I think sheet 3 & 4 could be shortened into just one sheet/four measures only (Goes along with trying to introduce something interesting faster.)

Other than that, it’s pretty nice-- good luck on continuing it.

Good song! But, as Octomarine_ said, you could probably have a melody in sheet 6.

For me is very repetitive and annoyng :P
And I agree, there should be a melody

Thanks guys, I’ll try and do that.

http://www.notessimo.net/page/browse/songs.html/_/notessimo2/requiem-for-a-toaster-r67064

Hi.

Absolutely hated it
5/5

(If you didn’t notice the contradiction, may I point it out to you? I rated 5/5 even though I said I hated it. You are very sad for not getting that in the first place)

Nicenicenice. Nothing more really to say.

http://www.notessimo…rst-song-r67070

Eh, I was thinking of making this song so that a concert band could play it, but there’s gonna be some stretches [like having trombones as main melody]. Also, I’m testing out having a song’s chord progression have an accidental in it.

EDIT: http://www.notessimo.net/page/browse/songs.html/_/notessimo2/the-traitor-r67076 updated

Octo: It has appegios. Insta 5/5 and feature. :P

Also http://www.notessimo…dat-song-r67090
(I have mixed feeling so far on this)

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It had potential till the metal guitar came in.

IMO the Metal guitar helped, but I’m not 100% behind this riff, it’s ok, but I feel it could be improved.

its too jagged… add in 4 bar stretched metal guitar an octave lower and it sounds a lot better

In my opinion Metal Guitar is often usable…
I prefer Fender Strat