That was good! I could see that being used in a video game.
That’s great Teddy! I don’t see any problems with it.
Money for Nothing 
Sounds great so far, Fran!
Okay guys you told me whats wrong, but I have no idea how to fix it cause i have limited knowledge in music theory.
So here it is with a more normal chord progression.
I’d like to know what I should do (to keep it sounding “minor”), so i can continue knowing at least the intro is good
That was really good but going from what you had before…did you mean this? (I just saw it going in this direction…thats all)
Seeing as its in aminor you could always and in the EVIL diminished chord, in this key it’d be g#dim so g# b d 
Kamarai has troll emoticons too :fuckyea:
silly ashley… oh wait
I thought collabs were a private thing?
I’m new to collabs kinda. So…
Note to self: Do NOT post about collabs.
Sigh, I’m not sure if I should stick with what I have here… The new part is definitely different and a radical change, but it transitions acceptably well (and fairly easily too) and provides good build up IMO.
Please do go on with it
It sounds as if it is building up to something EXTREMELY epic…and then going back to the start XD
So this is like…something different i suppose…unfortunately…i can’t find a way to make a transition >.< any ideas/feedback?
Well you can post your collab if ashley gives you permission.
Another Note to self: Make sure you get permission to post your collab.
QVX I think the Synth needs something more dynamic added to it, and I think you can just add some background synths to sheet 5 duplicated, cause I like what you have there with the synths than what you currently have with sheet 6 anyway, but thats only IMO, I don’t know what other people will say.
P.S. Thanks!
Sheet 6 was going to be the transition XD
Thanks Kamarai
I couldn’t help myself… I had to post this
Don’t ask me how I did this… I don’t know either…
The build-up to sheet 12 and 13 was a bit too long.
Other than that, the song sounds great in all points of view.
[Could be less repetitive as a whole, but keep going, because Starwars will still rate it 4.5.]