Here is another
I think I want to do more on it… Should I?
I hope this gets noticed over all the spamXD
Oh wellz. I made this beat today and thought it sounded pretty cool even though its sort of minimalistic. The focus is obviously on the beat but i actually rather like the bassline as well. Im curious to know what you guys think of it:)
https://www.notessimo.net/?id=90768
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Apparently the /notessimo thing is acting like a retard, so here is a link instead
[http://www.notessimo.net/viewtopic.php?f=90928&t=90768](http://www.notessimo.net/viewtopic.php?f=90928&t=90768)Yes! 
Here I posted many of my unfinished covers xD
Hi Kam.
So uh seems like you sure love opening your songs with chords nowadays. It’s okay just you should probably introduce a melody or something interesting earlier. Try to see if you could get that (a melody) into somewhere like sheet 6. Also, I think sheet 3 & 4 could be shortened into just one sheet/four measures only (Goes along with trying to introduce something interesting faster.)
Other than that, it’s pretty nice-- good luck on continuing it.
Good song! But, as Octomarine_ said, you could probably have a melody in sheet 6.
For me is very repetitive and annoyng 
And I agree, there should be a melody
Thanks guys, I’ll try and do that.
Absolutely hated it
5/5
(If you didn’t notice the contradiction, may I point it out to you? I rated 5/5 even though I said I hated it. You are very sad for not getting that in the first place)
Nicenicenice. Nothing more really to say.
http://www.notessimo…rst-song-r67070
Eh, I was thinking of making this song so that a concert band could play it, but there’s gonna be some stretches [like having trombones as main melody]. Also, I’m testing out having a song’s chord progression have an accidental in it.
EDIT: http://www.notessimo.net/page/browse/songs.html/_/notessimo2/the-traitor-r67076 updated
Octo: It has appegios. Insta 5/5 and feature.
Also http://www.notessimo…dat-song-r67090
(I have mixed feeling so far on this)
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It had potential till the metal guitar came in.
IMO the Metal guitar helped, but I’m not 100% behind this riff, it’s ok, but I feel it could be improved.
its too jagged… add in 4 bar stretched metal guitar an octave lower and it sounds a lot better
In my opinion Metal Guitar is often usable…
I prefer Fender Strat
Here’s what I’ve been working on, I’m planning on using classical rules to write metal.
http://www.notessimo.net/page/browse/songs.html/_/metal-rock/metal/metallic-symphony-demo-version-r67092
It already sounds repetitive.
It sounds like one big clump. I don’t know how else to explain it.
I am trying to write tech death, it’s not going to be very easy to digest, if you listen to it a few times it should sound less clumpy and repetitive, or just lower the tempo to like 100. If it still sounds repetitive, then I’ll take that into consideration.
BTW this is the sort of sound I’m going for, but + some classical aspects in writing → http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wEywYigygnk