Unfinished Songs / Demos

Awesome SP (rock)
Can’t wait till it’s done (rock)

dont know that I’m going to finish it… maybe it shud be in the up for grabs thread

Newest update of Barrenism.

I want criticism NOW!!!

I didn’t like the high metal guitar
Other than that it was good just pretty repetitive, not that that is bad…im not one to talk ROFL

And umm if you mean like an overlord for “Barren” its spelled Baron…

That was in 3/4 time right? Nice, nice…in my experience, it’s hard to make a drum beat for a 3/4 song, I can’t wait for the finished product.

Wow I think your right StarWars
That makes me like it even more

i was bored

I thought I’d post this here as well.
Here’s the link: listen.php?id=39251

is this for the space game? because othrwise this makes no sense whatsoever, like i mean it doesnt fall under any category.

I guess your right. I might get rid of it at some point. At least, and very likely, I’ll bring it down about an octave.

You’re thinking of a type of plane. I’m thinking “barren” as in something along the lines of “a place without the appropriate things for an organism to survive.” So no, I didn’t spell it wrong, I used a different word with the same pronunciation.

My baron is like “Baron Von Skildevicth”

So, here’s a little snippet of Hyrule Field…

“Uncool, I was already working on this.”
“It’s been done before…”
“Why do the drums sound so bad?”

Anyways, uh…I didn’t do the beginning yet, because, well, it’s annoying. And since I’m percussionally challenged, it sounds like someone is having a seizure over a drum kit, so suggestions are welcome. Also, I did this by ear, so I probably got the accompaniment all wrong. Derp derp. Whatever, that’s why I’m here. (Oh, and what do you think of the accompaniment’s volume? Too soft?)

As for panning, perhaps I’m just stubborn, or I don’t feel like going through the tedium of editing every individual note, so I think I’ll skip that. (But I might do it later, if people actually like this or something…)

Also, I know this is a popular song, so if anyone has already been working on this for a long time, just speak up and I can put mine on hold…

Comments? Criticism? Mindless backlash? Should I continue?

you can take mine, its on page 28 or rather, just give me credit.

Very good, actually! 8.5-9/10!!
Criticism:
I think the pizzicato was kind of off, but I guess that’s best you can do on Notessimo.

That’s all! Very, very, very good!

Thanks for the offer, but I think I prefer to do it myself. Thanks anyways!

You mean the low pizzicato I used through the whole thing? Yeah, that part was a bit iffy for me as well. I think it’s actually supposed to be some brass instrument, but I couldn’t quite find one suitable for it. I’ll keep messing around with it, I guess. (And I hate how the pizzicato instrument is a bit flat. It’s such a shame, since the tone is so nice…oh well.) Thanks for the support!

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OOPS THIS LINK IS BROKEN!

No, the high notes.

sry