Unfinished Songs / Demos

CRITICISM PLEASE!

REMEMBER THAT IT IS A DEMO, NOT A FINISHED VERSION!

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yeah, just posting this to work on a different computer.

That. Was. Awesome.

Are you sure that was unfinished? Otherwise, it would make a great addition as it is to the Vidya Games thread. Great job, although if you do re-post this as a finished song, I would suggest that the title be changed to Tetris (remix).

That is unfinished.

And where is the Video Game thread?

Here.

I would have boosted the lead synth’s volume up a little, and change a few of the notes to sixteenths but other then that it was good.

An outstanding piano piece I’ve been working on.
Bekken

P.S.
It’s not original.

Nice song for that, looks hard to make on notessimo.
If it was original, I would be crying in tears and inviting 1000 people to this site.

Here’s a piece I’m working on, it’s called “The Coming Storm”, I plan on making it a progressive metal piece.

I’d say it is heavily influenced by bands such as Slayer and Kamelot.

Enjoy the work in progress I guess.

Oh, and any constructive criticism is welcomed and appreciated.

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not fast enough weird chords I didnt hear any slayer in there.

Heh, I still have a long way to go, I’ve had some thoughts of revamping the intro anyway.

here is a couple riffs that I wrote awhile back it might help you

Nice, that was a little…inspirational?

No really, I have something in mind for drums, I just don’t want it TOO generic, still giving the layout some thought, so far I’ve been doing improv’s.

you realize that there was a guitar and bass part too + I think you should not go too unconventional until you become more skilled

Understood, but I want to keep it along the lines of and if you know what I mean, versus .

Still, I appreciate your criticism and respect your point of view.

Hypocrite.

exactly, what I was thinking.

um you dont see anything unconventional from me do you?