Unfinished Songs / Demos

I had a dream last night of you adding some really awesome notes to the beginniong. Only of I could remember what they were

Remix of my first song.
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Make it longer

First of all, that’s what she said.
Secondly (Can I say secondly?), this is the Unfinished Songs/ Demos Thread. Of course he’s/she’s going to make it longer.

hehe that’s what she said
second its was encouragement to keep going deeper into the song each time going further and furter in

I have no idea what I can do with this, I’m getting braindead.

Thats what she said!

getting back on to this.

I was working on this but it turned into a bunch of random metal riffs I want an opinion on which riffs are best

Your song didn’t show up when I saw it but when i quoted it it showed up
EDIT: do you guys see his song in the forum?? cause i don’t see it in either post unless im editing…

I can see it in his post but in yours I can’t. In fact, I can never see songs in quotes.

i see it in his post.

Strange…it didn’t show up in his post on my wii but it does at school

AND HERES MY LATEST SONG
Im hoping it will be my longest

Good creepy music! Rather like Roasty’s song! I think it would need to be more interesting though. It all seemed like it was the same thing over and over again. But it’s just a demo, I expect it will be great when finished!

Well Its just the start…my inspiration is One
so its going to turn into a hard metal song

Double Post LOL
thank god for Fishrockers Under the Bridge…I was stuck on the metal guitar and decided eh why not take a look at it? And that spawned the metal part of this song
The acoustic part drags on though…basically giving it a minute intro and a very long solo

Metal guitar part was good. Intro was way too long. FIX IT

omg thiiiisssss

K. Ask and you shall recieve!!!
EDIT: I pretty much cut the acoustic part in 1/2 but it still has its intended effect

LOL another double post…

The “story” is that a guy crashed was in a war and he is the only survivor of a air strike gone horribly wrong…

Hope you like the effects