Why, thank you! I just threw in a couple of instruments in like, 5 minutes. :o
If I can pry myself off my morning coffee, I may have a chance to finish Heresy.
You have got some serious talent.
again, the guitar is the bad
PS: You miss TNT
http://notessimo.net/song-48534
EDIT: I added Your time has come
Note: in the 7 & 8 sheets, at the 3’rd measure, the bass tab is
A----A-A-A-G-F#-E----E----E-E----E
[b]Just experimenting with interference and slow tempo.
Anastasia.
P.S. I really liked that song, fran5! I’d love to hear it when it’s done! c:[/b]
That’s a cool song fran!
It’s good … but too early to see what’s going on. Also it has the same name as one of my piano exam pieces!
I didn’t post that, because I copied it off of Mario Paint when I first got here.
I neeeeeeeeeeeeeed finsh the song
[b]Okay. So I got the strength to power through the intro of my Conquest rendition.
In my honest opinion, I think it sounds really good!
Conquest (FIAB Remix).
Enjoy![/b]
That does sound really good! The transition from sheet 0 to 1 is really abrupt though. It’s catchy though!
There ya go, thats more like it!
But the snare, timpani combo doesn’t sound very good.
Lower the timpani to around G2 or so, timpani should normally be at the low notes. It gives it more of warlike feel, which is what you probably should be trying to portray… which i don’t really see in this ![]()
You probably should wait until you have almost finished your song to name it, unless you know exactly how its gonna turn out.
Its alright to keep it named “unfinished song”, no one will care if you keep it unnamed until its finished ![]()
Rating: 4.3/5
Kamarai, it’s a cover of a remix of this song, so the name is predetermined. (I can’t find the specific remix to link to, so this is the original version)
I had no problem with the timpani/snare myself. I thought the whole thing sounded pretty good!
You really do. It actually sounds like a real rock song. You should come up with some real lyrics for it!
Because i’m bad speaking english, i can’t make a good voice part, that’s happened when i made Eye of the tiger XD
And I think that i miss something for the chorus
LOL, i didn’t know that.
What do you mean just like “Eye of the Tiger”? That has it’s own lyrics. Unless, this new song is a cover?
Did you listen Your time has come?
This is a song made by Audioslave, and i want to make a cover (and feature )
When I posted my first version of Eye of the Tiger, the song was a bit incomplete, because the voice wasn’t good.
Exactly that is happend to my unfinished song
Shall I continue?
Personally…i think it needs another instrument, say maybe strings #3
Other than that, its kinda repetitive, and seems like an extended intro, maybe you could say half it and have the second section as a breakdown or something?
Sounds good though, could be worth continuing.
You seem to be using the same chords throughout … that makes it repetitive. But still I like it!