Want you that i complete Hold the line?! XD
Won’t finish, mostly because I am too intimidated by the spastic drumming that starts at 1:08 on the real song.
Not half finished with this song, but though it would be a good idea to post to get feedback.
Nice songs guys…
Hey… can one of you make a cover of Money for Nothing?
Shouldn’t you put that in the requests thread?
Ok: show me the way
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Nice, kala! I’d love that music in a game.
Yeah, its really great, except…i think it would sound better if layer 3 was a constant sound (so that they hold until the next note)
Also I would suggest almost doubling the tempo. For it to work, though, you will need to alter some notes from eights to quarters and sixteenths to eights. Overall pretty good. I still really enjoyed.
Demo number 2. The only thing that I need help on is the transition between 6 and 7. I might just leave 7 out all together. Thanks for the listens! I hope to finish this soon with a fantastic ending. Note that 10 is just a temporary ending.
Great songs everyone. Can’t wait till they are finished!
That was just incredible, guitarmania! Please do finish it!
Thank you Nuselline! I’m in the process of looking for collabs on this song. I plan to edit, finish, and hopefully get it featured, I still have another week or more of work needing to be done, but thanks for the support.
To me, this song seems to be a compilation of ideas/randomness, so i wouldn’t really see it as a song itself, but more of an idea piece…
Its kinda hard to judge because of that which is why you haven’t received much feedback (that and the lack of active people here XD).
I would agree, with both statements. I still have a lot of editing to do.
In the middle of the piece, I sort of changed my mind on the style of the piece from a techno/pop style to an orchestral style. My goal is to separate these two Ideas into individual songs. My plan is to remove the beginning and replace it with a more orchestral style beginning. The only problem is this will take a lot of time.
Thank you for the feedback though. I really enjoy hearing how others view my work, it helps me to progress and become a better composer.
Edit: After reviewing my piece a few more times, I realized exactly what you were talking about. I never seemed to stick to the same style and each sheet seemed like it did not compliment the same idea the last sheet was. My transitions between sheets could be better too. Hopefully I will be able to redo the first 7 sheets soon and make the song much more coherent.
Why was every note panned to the right?
Sorry about that, my left speaker is broken, so I just make all notes come out the right. I kind of neglected the fact that others were listening to this.
You should probably stop composing and get proper sound quickly.
I composed most of my songs with just one speaker and they all sounded worse when I listened to them properly. =(