The song changed s up and running again. Currently its 3:50 long and i still need to expand on one section and add a solo.
If people want I’ll put a few of the sheets on here to wet your appetite.
I’m going for a feature on this one!
Karo, in demo 8 i would suggest having the lower piano play every note except on occasion. I find 3 bars of something simple then 1 of something unique to be a catchy pattern.
Seafoam, um… the song seems just only like a repeating pattern with drums added every 10 seconds. Can’t really say much about it other than it’s really bland.
Karo, Demo 8. Nice drums but gosh I’ve used that pattern [like (C, Ab, Eb, Bb) (F#, D, A, E) (C#, A, E, ] so many times. I liked how Kursk did something different. Notes sounded off at times but it’s ignorable. Not your best unfinished songs. wait.
[quote=“Octoviator”]
I’ve used that pattern [like (C, Ab, Eb, Bb) (F#, D, A, E) (C#, A, E, ]
Again… the famous “Minor Chords” (in my opinion)
Cm…Ab…EB…Bb…||
G-----Ab-----G------F-------||
Eb----Eb-----Eb-----D------||
C------C-----Bb-----Bb------||
I.------VI.----III.-----VII.-----||
That would be true, except if you don’t mention that you are using power chords, it’s fairly safe to assume you are talking about the full triad. That, and the “proper” notation for power chords would be “I5-VI5-III5-VII5” (even then, lowercase might still be correct).
You do realise that if you finish that to the level of quality of the first couple of measures somebody is going to try to kill you and steal your talent, right?