Unfinished Songs / Demos

Just an update on anything by me.

The song changed s up and running again. Currently its 3:50 long and i still need to expand on one section and add a solo.

If people want I’ll put a few of the sheets on here to wet your appetite.

I’m going for a feature on this one!

Karo, in demo 8 i would suggest having the lower piano play every note except on occasion. I find 3 bars of something simple then 1 of something unique to be a catchy pattern.

Eh, it seems no-one uses the Techno Synth. Oh well. I took a stab at it.

Seafoam, um… the song seems just only like a repeating pattern with drums added every 10 seconds. Can’t really say much about it other than it’s really bland.

Karo, Demo 8. Nice drums but gosh I’ve used that pattern [like (C, Ab, Eb, Bb) (F#, D, A, E) (C#, A, E, ] so many times. I liked how Kursk did something different. Notes sounded off at times but it’s ignorable. Not your best unfinished songs. wait.

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I’ve used that pattern [like (C, Ab, Eb, Bb) (F#, D, A, E) (C#, A, E, ]

Again… the famous “Minor Chords” (in my opinion)

Cm…Ab…EB…Bb…||

G-----Ab-----G------F-------||
Eb----Eb-----Eb-----D------||
C------C-----Bb-----Bb------||
I.------VI.----III.-----VII.-----||

Oh sorry Fran. Didn’t know. :confused:

Anyway, new demo. Almost done with one of my previous unfinished songs!
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The “I” should be lowercase (i-VI-III-VII), though some variations do use a major tonic with this progression.

If this was done using power chords this would not be necessary.

That would be true, except if you don’t mention that you are using power chords, it’s fairly safe to assume you are talking about the full triad. That, and the “proper” notation for power chords would be “I5-VI5-III5-VII5” (even then, lowercase might still be correct).

But nobody cares, really.

Didn’t know that

So…
I - > CM
i → Cm
Vi → Abm
VI → AbM
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Yes.
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Yes, assuming you’re in the key of C Major for the first one, C major or C minor for the second, and C Minor for the last two.

Theres a special thread for this… [/music theory]

Well the discussion continued on from an unfinished song. No point going to a whole other thread.

QVX: Fair point…

srsly, 9 posts in a row without a single unfinished song?

OH WAIT DERP.

Holy shit.

You do realise that if you finish that to the level of quality of the first couple of measures somebody is going to try to kill you and steal your talent, right?

@octo: WOW… I can’t wait for the final product.

I’m just going to say one word, for any detailed version of it will be long.
Ouch.

this is coming from a noob
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Bullshit. You’re good. Really good compared to me. But, back to the song that MrTeddy has.
Woah, Swing. COOL! (Oh hey, This is my 30th post. PARTAY!)

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I wonder how many unfinished songs i have