00 by Karo

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#1

[i][b]I added some strings, some more bass, and layered the sitar over the Damant Spectrum as improvements to measures 0-7. Measures 8-11 would be worked on in the following days. Enjoy! :3

And as usual, suggestions and constructive criticisms are greatly appreciated![/b][/i]

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#2

I don’t like the breaks between the toms when they enter, it just sounds boring.

#3

Sorry to bother; but do you mean the breaks in measure 3, measure 4-5, or both?

#4

5/5

#5

Sheet 2 end of measures 2 and 4 and Sheet 5 end of measures 2 and 4.

#6

It sounds a lot better now.

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#7

A good title for this would be “Persian Pursuit”.

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#8

Sheet 2 doesn’t have toms
 (Then again, I made a mistake with my previous reply, so
)
But I think I understand what you’re saying now; I’ll try it out and see how it sounds. c:

#9
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#10

I really like where this is heading :D
I like the violins too.