Read the comment of the original and you’ll know where this came from
Basically strings, things reordered, shortened by a lot because I dont want to work on the whole song. Added a few notes
Timothy, Please take this song into consideration. You can make good music. But (In my opinion) you rush. Some songs you do spend time on. But you need to put that time into every song. Make it sound EXACTLY how you want it to sound.