a small thing I created[UPDATED] by Unknown

Songs
#1

woohoo!

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#2

that was amazing

#3

In my defense PART 2

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#4

Thanks!

#5

HOLY HOLIES
It’s cool.

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#6

BASS DRUM WAS BORING

#7

i will add some more stuff… NEW STUFF ADDED!

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#8

Judging a song by it’s bass drum? I know why you would do that with a metal song or a dubstep song, etc., but with a TECHNO SONG? The bass drum isn’t meant to be fancy in a techno song, you know…

#9

Not unless you want to make the song more alive. The drums in a electronic song or ANY song need to be worked on as much as the melody, bass, or whatever you want to call a part in a song.

#10

This song has no set genre. Your point is invalid.

#11

He says he doesn’t like the bass drum, that doesn’t mean the whole song sucks…

#12

Well, its to normal and short to say IMO. To see if this will be good we must have pactience. xD

#13

It doesn’t. I love it so far.
But for the sake of criticism, I don’t like how loud the closed hi-hats are and the open hi-hat is soft. I suggest using a different kind of closed hi-hat (preferably #2).
I don’t like how near the end you shorten the note length of some of the electric pianos.

#14

Well it sounds like it would be a techno song, therefore my point is NOT invalid, good sir.

#15

aw

#16

Incorrect.

#17

you are about 4 notes off of “Runaway” by Bon Jovi- in the first section

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