I wish I could here this performed by a real orchestra! It was mostly very good, and I complement your use of the french horn in the melody and flute in the… er… other…melody…
Sorry, I’m only in the eighth grade and I don’t particularly name these well. Some of the transitions from one part to another were too fast to really understand the change, the other thing I would change is some of the long notes are held either too short or too long. Otherwise it’s really good.