Sheet two was fine, work on actually having a rhythm. Most, if not all notes, should be on a line. Note values should be as long as the space between notes.
dude whats with sheet 2, you never do stuff like that, do it more often.
maybe i had to put more notes & add some drums
maybe that “Sheet 2” sounds like a piece of a song
sheet 2 = EASTPAK
Sheet 1 = 1990’s Videogame Rock