Recycled post.
The progressive organ and percussion needs to be louder.
Well, I’d suggest this:
(Intro) (Sheet 2, with a continuing guitar part so it’s double the current length. Maybe if you wanted to transition between sheets, have a cymbal buildup and fadeout?) (Sheet 1) (Another verse, building up to sheet 0) (Sheet 0 twice) (Continue).
Take it or leave it. ![]()
I also disagree with Aliens. Organ needs to be louder, but not the percussion. It would be too overwhelming.
Intro (suggesting cool atmospheric effects and/or a separate melody to a slower, perhaps gradually increasing tempo)
Sheet 2 (without guitar)
Sheet 2 (with guitar)
Sheet 2 (with guitar and cymbal build-up)
Fade out
Quick drum/cymbal build
Sheet 1
Sheet 0
Go!
Louder percussion? Maybe by a bit in sheets 1-2, but not in sheet 0… That would just increase the muddiness, imo.
Reliking this because it’s amazing. And should be featured once it’s done.
So happy I caught this in recently edited.
Can’t wait to hear the finished version!
Nice Orchestra! 5/5
Dat Piccolo.