I might edit this, it starts falling apart near the end. >.<
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is this an original composition? because if so you might wanna edit it. the whole way through it feels like something’s missing. Plus there are a couple gaps between sheets.
I’d give it a 4 out of 5.
the gaps are a bug when you copy measures on a sheet.
Some really cool stuff here… the melody with the tubas/trombone and also the melody with the strat… very nice. 27 to 28 transition was really nice. Some instrument ussage I really did not like; the pizzicato violins were very out of tune, the green synths… hmmmm…
TFB could I please take this song and do something to it? I would really like to. I love this song but want a couple things a certain way and would love to do it. Could I? (it would be a remix)
Some real nice things going on here, but the biggest thing that is missing is a good solid bass.
Go ahead. The bassline is the synths.
I liked the effect the pizzicato/damant had during the chorus. That’s why it’s there.
I love !
I like Sheet 12, But, i didn’t like Sheet 6 :S
The guitar is wrong with all instrument
But, Very good job ! 
5/5
I imagine this being on Shangri-La on CoD:Bo Zombie :B I like it though.
This is the first song I’ve seen with gaps besides Timothy’s and my own… Other than those worthless pieces that are an abomination to mankind, It’s a new genre I think! 3.9/5
It doesn’t have gaps?
Very nice! Kinda dreamy feel.
The gaps are just created by bugs.