I’m still working on this. So far it’s pretty good. I’m having trouble with the guitar solo so I’ll put that in later.
New update: I added a little sumtin sumtin at the end.
Another new update: I changed the guitar because of complaints i’ve gotten. Credit to ixsetf for telling me how to make it sound better. I haven’t changed all of the guitar but I did the beggining and added bass.
3rd Update: I finished the bass. I changed up the guitar more. Now All I need is a solo and stuff.
I think it’s how you used the guitar by itself a lot, which emphasizes it’s annoying tone. If you used other instruments with it, like bass or drums it should make it sound better without losing the metal feel. Personally I always double the metal guitar with a fender strat at the same volume, it sounds like a single metal guitar and it’s a little easier to hear the pitch.