This song… I don’t know, I want to finish it, but I don’t know whether it’s good or not.
If you want me to finish it, can you tell me what it needs after page 12? I’m stuck there.
Critique the rest of the song, too.
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I liked that… until sheet 13.
that drum roll did not work IMO. if you want to finish the song you need to start having some kind of main melody “chorus” part to the song.
George… you just don’t understand. He made this song to have the structure of a more olden song. kinda like stravinsky or mozart or beethoven. theres no real chorus in their songs. A chorus like part isn’t something you “need.” Its just a lazy way of recuperating an older idea from a song with a use of power and energy. I’m sure with the way this has gone so far clearwatersaphire will create something less lazy than a chorus and more effective. But I do think the drumroll was bad though.
blech or maybe he hasn’t gotten to the chorus yet.
I say continue it.
Me too!
CONTINUE THIS NOWWWWW!!! 5/5 stars 
Sounds epic!
sheet 12 was cool
you gotta make it sound like you are saving the pokemon world from cyrus (with dialga and palkia in his party)
Very nice, I think you should finish it.
well before the bass cam in I agree with you totally (and I do understand man, lol). BUT(you failed to notice the bass) since the bass came in Tedd there is no way anyone can say its an “olden” song. sheets 1-7 are an intro.
Nice song clearwater continue it!
where did I say that? it is structured like an olden song I didn’t say it was an olden song? so instrument use doesn’t really key into structure.
but when the bass came in the structure changed… so I was just using the bass as a spot to talk about that.
Please finish. This song has potential.