seriously?.. SERIOUSLY? you need to get your head out of your… im not gonna finish that sentence but im sure you know what I mean. I loved it, and especially since this person is really new I think he did (or she but I doubt that) exceptionally well.
Well I’m proud of my little brother that he can make things like that. I know it’s not about the person, but he’s only 13. If only you could hear him play the keyboard at home you’d see what awesomeness he can produce. So he’s still young, I’m sure he’ll improve. Just don’t talk him down too much.
We/They are not talking him down, it is criticism for the song. (however TFB’s wasn’t the best of criticism)
The reason i said we is because i am about to say what i have a problem with when i hear this song…
-It is quite repetitive (it seems to only be one idea) and because of this it seems to drone on to me, even though it is a short song
-I wasn’t a fan of the drumming, it was the same almost the whole time until the minor variation towards the end.
That doesn’t mean that there were no good aspects of the song though…
-There were some nice melodies in there but unfortunately they were overused and weren’t used as well as they could have been.
-The fact that it loops is quite nice
I do! Now I’m thinking of those things when I make a song. I made a song called 20th, but that was almost ready and I didn’t really made it a lot better because that was before TheFinalBoss gave me that criticism. So now I’m trying to make them a lot better!
To first comment: Really dude? This song rocks. how can you even type, I dislike this song. This song is one of the best songs i listened to!. And the authors older brother is proud of his little bro.
I think all that “criticism” is right… I haven’t been on
Notessimo for a looooong time, and now when I hear this
song again, I start to think if this is really 'my best song.
I’m trying to improve myself so I can create better songs,
because I only like the last part of the song and (wtf)
the drums really suck. But anyway, thank you all for everything!