Back to me by Joseph

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#1

well, there were some things I felt like I needed to do, but I mainly did exactly what ~star~ told me.

Also, I didn’t get rid of the repetition of sheets 2,0,3, because it’s a rock song, there for it’s going to have 2 verses, and 2 choruses before the bridge.
Old player!

EDIT: I changed the hi- hats in the chorus to cymbal #1, props to antonim

EDIT:
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#2

Oh lol. I didn’t think you’d actually change up your song for me :stuck_out_tongue:

#3

well, that’s the only way to FREAKING MAKE IT GOOD!!!

#4

Congrats on the feature. I assumed this version is the one you wanted featured, correct?
Also, Sheet 10 <3

(Suggested alternate tempo variations:
Sheet 1/2: 220
Sheet 0/3: 210
Sheets 6-10: as is
Makes for an interesting listen for sure, though I do prefer it as is)

#5

Congrats on the feature, definitely deserves it!
Sheet 2 <3

#6

Simple rock. It’s pretty good.

Choruses need some identity (especially third); they all are exactly the same.
As well, the chorus doesn’t sound like a chorus. I really can’t explain how to fix that as I’m terrible at making choruses.

In my opinion, the song is weakest during the chorus and outro, but everything else is great.
By the way, really nice intro.

#7

Heh, seems me and you have differing opinions :stuck_out_tongue:

#8

how do you want me do that?

#9

For the chorus, I would suggest using Cymbal #1 in quarter time and getting rid of the hi-hats.

#10

Congratulations!

#11

tags with rock
leaves the song categorized in notessimo 2 rather than as rock

#12

I can’t music, at all.