Maybe we’ll save that part for a bridge. For now, let’s focus on the verses.
okay. sniffle
I don’t like the way the bass transitions from 1 to 4 .___.
Ace and I will work on it some more! 
Actually, the only thing I don’t like is the name… It doesn’t really fit…
Why you repeat Sheets 0 and 1.
t’was the first name we chose… If there are any suggestions, please don’t be afraid to PM!
this is still really good.
I think you should tone down the speed on the parts where it picks up so that it kind of matches better with the mood you set at the start. Continue with sheet 7 for awhile and maybe double the piano parts at certain areas for added drama. It could make a great chorus. So far, everything is fantastic.
Here are some names to try:
The Engulfing War, Year of the Crusade, My Moment of Crisis, Taken By Force, Ripples in Power; just some suggestions.
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I understand your feeling about the solo’s, i suck at making them too, i want big tutorial post in the Songs library 