first part can be better, the other part is straight ripped right out of that song
man come on
Star gave me permission
I haven’t remixed the tune yet but
Here are a few suggestions:
1. Rearrange the sheets in the following order to get a short, but sensical introduction: 0-1-2-3-5-6-11-12-13-14
2. Extend the note value of the Fade In #1 in Sheet 1 to 96, and place it at G4 (so it connects with the cymbal at the start of the next sheet).
3. Make a new sheet and add it to the end of the entroduction from 1. Add loud cymbals at the beginning as well as a long metal guitar note(s) on E. This can signal that the intro is over and you have a new phrase coming.
4. Try to think of new phrases to use instead of the one you currently repeat for way too long. The introduction gives the feeling and pace that this song should either have a really heavy, fast demeanor and/or slow portions intermingled.
I’m sure you’ll come up with some new additions apart from my own. Keep it up!