Breakin' Down (finished) by George C. Van liew

Dupstep 999

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Haha 999 speed… cool song

For the solo in sheet 3, its too short,

whats going on with perplexing peril?

There is no solo in sheet 3

Haven’t done much lately but will be back on it…

Thanks The!

Well, the tempo was reaching 1000! If the max quantity were 1500…

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xP

by the solo i guess i mean the high octave violins

Like a Boss!

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This one has the same problem as Perplexing Peril, but in this case the drums are driving the track, which is a plus. However, it’s super-short length and gimmicky 999 tempo stuff is really a letdown, especially since this track starts out great.
Although the intro isn’t stellar, sheet 5 is what I’m talking about. The general sound really gets you going and the upwards movement of the bass really adds tension, which is released well in sheet 8 (Sheet 6 being even more build-up). It’s after this point that the song really falls apart. The reused sheets 5 and 6 don’t work backwards, and thus since sheet 10 is supposed to be a release of energy and not tension, it just seems sudden and eratic.
The main good point of sheet 11 and 12 is the drums which are there to drive the track, which they do well. The tension builds again in a good way and is released somewhat well by the following sheets, but after this point the song is just on repeat until it’s rather sudden end. Again I’ve typed far too much and so I’ll leave you with this thought: After about 4 listens I was able to listen to the song and see how all the different sections connect to one another. I know it’s good to not be repetitive but when you have a 1:30 song that feels rushed and unfinished, along with being so random that you can’t understand the song fully, you need to take a step back and add some good old simplicity.

I see what your saying.

I hate simplicity D;

xD

This sounds like real Dubstep! I’m impressed.

^ thank you

This is super good.
The harpsichord makes a good attachment to it :slight_smile: