Breaking Worlds (almost done) by guy who can BARELY write worth crap

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#1

I’m almost done, but the solo and final chorus need some last adjustments.

CRITICISM NEEDED BADLY!

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#2

You need to fix the chord progression in your chorus. Try changing the 2nd and 3rd chord changes.

#3

I can’t get it to sound good. What can I change it to?

#4

Don’t like the vocals