Let’s hope this gives you some helpful motivation.
I couldn’t figure out what was the melody in the beginning, when the low strings came in.
I didn’t like how the hi-hat disappeared a few phrases after it came in. Maybe if it faded out like the rest of the drums?
I don’t think I’ve ever said this before - Snare was too soft. If you’re gonna put it in there, it’s at least worth something to hear it, right?
If that bass at the end is going to be a transition, I think you should make the bass longer so it doesn’t sound so choppy, which seems to be a contradiction of the song.
do you still like it?
witch hi-hat? where?
did you like the toms on sheets 20, 23 and 24?