I WANNA COLLAB. All the sudden I like noise.
One thing…it’s challenging but this song will be 98% focused on noise…I’m giving actual notes and sounds a rest and listening to shit like Stomp…
I KINDA understand this kind of music so…I guess I’ll try to give some advice.
I’ve listened to a few breakcore tracks before and although I found it rather unpleasant, there WERE a few aspects that I “liked” (in the strangest sense of the word). What this kind of music lacks in melody, harmony etc, it makes up for in intense activity. These tracks are very busy and as such, require a more radical approach. So, that’s the first problem. The intro is too slow. The second problem is the drums. An isolated drum track from a piece of breakcore (I know you’re aiming for grindcore but your demo sounds nothing like it) does not sound like “boom tish boom tish” but rather “239r230ndjdfQ@#dfg@23TSDfjiewjsdkhfweg.” So yeah, that’s all you’re gonna get from meeeee.
I - I didn’t say I couldn’t collab with you, I just am uh … [says the rest in overly-confident tone] overrun with school-work and stuff. nods knowingly My internet studying hardly leaves room for anything else, you see.