Cynder (new) by SteveHarris

Alright, this is Cynder with all the fat cut off. Tell me what can change and how to, as this is my first original upload.
~SteveHarris

South park?

@ Aliens Exist
Yeah. You’re good at this, so could you tell me the biggest flaw with this song?

Um, I’m not sure.

Missing sheets?

Overlapping notes, some volume issues.

2/5

Thanks, keep it in mind. What would you say has to have the volume changed most?