Darkness (unfinished)

What should I do to improve this song?

based of Ctelin’s RPG Soundtrack!

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The metal guitar is way too loud. And at the half note at the end of sheet 5 makes it sound pretty bad to me. And the abrupt end of the voxes is kinda strange. Otherwise this song is amazing. Very well done piece. My hat is off to you.

But the name doesn’t really fit. Darkness? This isn’t a very dark song :confused:

I can’t decide which sheet I like best though… 1? 2? 6? Ugh…

I can’t wait to see more.

Thank you, I shall fix those guitars and vox’s, I ran out of charge so I couldn’t finish it.

Needs low bells.