Day After Leifeday [remix] {Update #3} by Erotical Trance/Aliens Exist =3/leifeday

Not counting whatever Aliens did as an update.
-leifeday

PS: What’s wrong with sheets 7 and 15? Please tell me so I can fix it.

the transition to sheet 7 is annoying. The low male vox is annoying. The bass is not a very good melody standalone. Needs more energy in sheets 7, 15, and 16.
Sheet 16 needs to transition to 10 better.
Wtf with Sheet 17 and 18?