DEMO! please critique

This is another idea I had please tell me what you think so I can improve
thanks,
pumpkinsandtears (rnote)

I only really liked sheet 2… That would make a good intro if you repeated it once and then continued. The other sheets just don’t make for a very good intro, sorry.

That’s okay im looking to get better

F and B together is a crime… Sorry but that’s the truth 3/5