Determination by Unknown

Tell if I should continue. Otherwise comment and enjoy.

im sorry… I did not like it, I would not continue this.

(shutup george D=<)

Something about the drums…
Something about the melody…
Feels like it needs improvement?

Funny how many of you criticize but don’t even tell me what the problem with the song is. How about some actual help so I can improve, ever thought of that. Tell me the problem, and I’ll try to fix up as best as I can.

The chords with the synth sounded funky. It made a weird sound. Try not using chords with that instrument. The beat was okay, but on sheets two and three, it needed more depth; it needed some bass. Also, it sounds just a bit generic.

put some grinds in it!