Hm, I wonder how this will work out.
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Gonna have to really work on that intro. It mostly sounds right but the rhythm is definitely wrong at some points (measure 10) and and quite a bit of incorrect octaves (measure 2,3) that require more than just the organ. Mainly, the guitar needs more chords at the start of each measure (the organ would be best as a background).
Acoustic guitar should definitely be louder. Measure 23 acoustic guitar is not right at all. Notes should be holding to create a final chord.
Overall the drums need to either be quicker (cymbals in intro) and quieter in most sections (cymbal, snare, bass drum all too loud).
I know it’s only 1 min and 20 seconds but I guess I know the song too well; if you end up working on this more these would be some good additions.
oh fuck, I started singing along I guess you have to finish this now.
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Thanks for advice, I’ve done some of these edits.
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The chorus <3333