In response to the vid you posted:
I dont know why they compared those 2 people. One is a musician and an artist and a prodigy… and the other is a drugged up punk who dosent know the first thing about music. sigh our world has turned into a horrible place if people REALLY compare those 2 people.
In response to your song: I have heard that chord progression to many times.
if you are going to have this simple of a song I would like to see some really nice panning or sound effects or something.
measure 54-70: what happened to your drums?
I really don’t like this… like 2/5 mabeh… pushing it.
You’re at a point where you are going to have to just keep writing music (if you want) to get yourself out of this spell. I’m not trying to be rude, but your latest songs haven’t been any good. Don’t let it discourage you… It happens to everyone doing something in the “artistic” world. but once you overcome this, you will be better.
This wasn’t meant to be a full song, so I didn’t know how to react when members wanted me to finish this by popular demand. I wasn’t prepared to make this a full length musical piece. So the critique factor is through the roof. I don’t blame you, George. I will compose better for my next song, I swear.
(Yes, I used fancy words; sue me.)
^ cool, I would like to see some more songs from you 
You know that video is a joke right? Just sayin.