Carrot, trust me when i say this, not many people will give out a 5/5, sometimes songs just have flaws that the artists don’t see until they’re pointed out (i know this alot). Take the criticism as a good thing, learn from it and grow as a composer.
To all those people going off at TFB, he’s trying to help, not make things worse; Criticism helps.
I personally liked the song, i only had a few problems with the drumming that really stood out, (mainly the fills and there were a few awkward bits with the snare).
Overall, 4/5, loved the melody, wish i could create one that beautiful.