I actually really liked that! The damant parts were great. The sitar made a nice change although I didn’t really like the scale on sheet 16. I also didn’t like the part after sheet 19, it was really good and all, a little repetitive, but didn’t fit into the rest that well. Also the ending wasn’t really that powerful.
All that being said, I enjoyed that, the acoustic guitars were great low, great job!
Half of that part was me deciding to change a riff from “Gateway to Paradise”
(The main metal guitar riff)