I didn’t read the first post. Oops.
I can’t tell if talking about his song is on topic or off?
turn the sound like all the way down. to like 1. gradually increase if ya cant hear m8
I already saw the video.
Okie.
I’m done spamming. Someone put a song on here.
It’s my first song 
That was good, but It looks like you were trying to copy the electric piano melody with the basses, (having them play the same thing), but you got the bass a little off. (In the first measure the pianos are playing E-A-C-E but the basses are playing D-G-B-D, which is not the same). Am I right? It’s just that the songs sounds a little out-of-tune because of that.
That was really good! The piano part and violin part didn’t really fit in together nicely though. You have great potential.
First!
Very good! It would be good to expand it though, feels like it’s only the beginning of a song. Also the melody is good, but its rhythm is completely even, in contrast to the rhythmic piano chords.
This is my first song that I made myself. I was just messing arond and this formed:
Its fine for a first song… the toms didn’t fit in and it was overall repetitive.
this song is pretty weird in my eyes. How long did it take to make it? because throughout the song there were very small improvements with each phrase. Like if you spent a week on one phrase then practiced song writing somewhere else than started the next phrase the next week. I love the melody used in the song (probably gonna be stuck in my head for a while). I only have two negative statements for this song (so if your shy to criticism you can probably close out the window right now), it was repetitive not going to tell you how repetitive but ill tell you that the repetitiveness needs to be worked on in your next song. the second criticism would be your chord choice, as it did make me cringe a bit (be careful putting two notes a single step apart from each other). But you have potential. Can’t wait to hear your next song!@!@!@!@!@!@!@!@!@!@!@!@!@!#@!#@!@#!#@!
edit: I have some advice also… don’t know if it would help you but it helped me. If you hear something that sounds the slightest bit wrong, don’t think that people won’t notice and change it right away until it sounds correct.
That was pretty good for a first song, Lev.
All i have to add to the other two is to work on your drumming… it seemed sorta random lol (not completely but definitely needs improvement).
But overall for a first song it is way better than most.
Sorry but the synth chords had me cringing in the beginning and end of the song. The F’s seem like a poor choice in the melody in the middle.
In general it seemed kinda off-tune.
Here’s my first little half-minute jingle, a good 10 minutes put into it. Here it is; Ludicrous BeatMarch Collogue, A.K.A The Small Diapson of the Tremble Clef A.K.A Bad Dudes from Mercury.
you know you can change the length of the notes by clicking on them with the mouse tool.
I assume you wanted it to sound like this
anyways I like your songs because they have a good melody and backgrounds, keep working!
Teddy is right, you can change the note values. It’s good though, the melodies are better than a lot of newbie’s.