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please tell me how i can make this better and how i can continue it 
“continue it”
Do you mean this is made up from you?
Well anyways it’s good so far. Try adding more instruments each sheet.
yes i made this lol
and sounds like a good idea
Continue it, please! It sounds really good so far.
Continuing Suggestions:
Hm… I think if you kept the Kalimbas and continued the melody line with the violins, it would sound really cool.
Oh, and I agree with mr. ice, add more instruments, i.e. a bass drum and some low (piano, vibraphone, female/male Vox) chords maybe?
Anyway, great job! Wanna see it finished 
its pretty nice… but the drums are not very good.
i would say to turn up the kalimbas and add more instruments
Continue it & put Strat Guitar
thanks guys for all the great comments i havent had this much attention ever!! this song is deticated to all of you !!! thanks guys
okay so this new edit has strat guitars asked for by timothy verbist would anyone else like to make a suggestion to what will be put in??