Here’s the heavily edited version to my previous song. I’ll finish it in a little while.
There are some mistakes I noticed.
Measure 3 of sheet 1. That quarter note chord needs to be at the end of the measure.
First measure of sheet 4. That first chord isn’t the chord its supposed to be.
Final measure of sheet 4. The trill (or whatever you call it) needs to be moved over slightly AND it is actually only 4 notes just so you know.
Also sheet 5, most of what you have there after that 2nd dotted quarter note is shifted over by an eighth note, and some of those notes are supposed to be quarter notes and not eighth notes also.
Not a ton to fix, but still some things that quickly jumped out at me.
I myself also think the drums are quite distracting since they don’t really flow that well 
Like in sheet 1, the small gaps throw me off.
But it wasn’t that bad either so far.
3.8/5
Yeah, I noticed the trill too. I tried to fix it, but I realized I would have to move everything to fix it (I thought it would be too much work, so I left it be. Yeah, I’m lazy 6_6).
Also, after listening to the song a bunch of times, I thought I made a poor choice by using the snares in Sheet 4, so the snares have to go. Plus that gap between Sheet 3 and 4 will be fixed. And the small gaps in Sheet 1. But I’m not that very good with drums because I sometimes get carried away with the beats. So I’ll fix the drums.
Everything else with the song that you noticed will be fixed. Thanks.