Sorry its been so long here it is… I think its done… what do you think Myte?
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i am now asking how it is with the TimoDyna Collab.
I don’t know what to think…oddly. Usually I would be all over it saying “BLAHBITY BLAH” but I just don’t know.
It sounded like a techno song at first then became a rock song then techno then rock AGHHGHGHGHG
The Low Ride Cymbal was too loud.
The violins seemed random.
Metal Guitar was good. Bass drum was too.
I’ll rate this… oh…I don’t know… I guess it’s good.
Oh it occurred to me on typing this!
Your melody was never clear enough. Like in Sheet 15. The strings seemed like the only melody there so the song wouldn’t get boring. But they were too quiet to be a melody!
I could never actually tell what the melody was unless it was the metal guitar.
This is a good song, still. Just because I’m mean doesn’t mean it wasn’t good.
(I’m just being overly critical)
4.5/5
Awesome… thats it
@ tim i said im quitting on it, it would take me a few years to iron out all your mistakes
Boy… I wish you would put a rating at the end of all your critiques on my songs… you have said less bad things on lots of my other songs, but I go away thinking “Wow… TFB hated this ;(”
When I was reading your critique I was like “Oh no, I messed up again facepalm” but then you rated it 4.5/5? Woa… please put a rating after all your critiques! xD!
Thanks!
If it’s hard to point out what was wrong, it was a minor mistake. I could barely think of what it was.
On a side note, loved the drums.
ooo thanks… (I did most of the drums) xP
nothing to do about it, it’s my autism