It was… interesting. I think this deserves a grouping rather than overall crit…
Sheets 0-3. Rating: 4.5/5
Very soft and smooth. Its a great intro, I dear say that alone could be featured.
However…
Sheets 4- (third) 5. Rating: 2.5-3/5
This part sounds like a completely diferent song, and has no conection whatsoever to the previous intro. It is extremely repetitive and has little well fitting change in it.
Sheets 10- (third) 12. Rating: 4/5
This goes back to sounding like it should be a part of the song. It has a different feel, but is closer than the previous phrase. And again, It is very repetitive.
Sheets 14-20 (end) Rating: 3.5/5
This is nice, as it goes back to the feeling of the song, and the original rhythm. However, again, repetitive.
Overall, It is a very nice song. I think if you rewrote Sheets 4- (third) 5, it would sound better. Other than that, I would give it a 4/5. Well done as always Aliens, and keeping working up!
Very nice.
Pretty nice intro. I like the beat, but, however, like skeletee said, it sounded like a completely different song after sheet 3. Then the synths came in. That felt slightly different. Then near the end, with the organs and the original beat, that was pretty good. The voxes were nicely executed, too.
In a nutshell, I’d have to give this song 4/5. It still needs work in some places, but overall, you did a good job composing this. 
Only 4 hours? xD
It was nice at parts but extremely out of nowhere with mediocre transitions. Still pretty good though
Flashcraft took me 18.
sheet 5, metal guitar was annoying.
Sheet 10, Synths were epic and really held it`s melody.
Sheet 12, OH MY GOD 5/5 LOL
Sheet 14, too quiet.
12 - 13, no. i don’t like this part at all.
way too many bass drums
I hated the bass drum at the beginning, and transitions were pretty bad. I like the idea of the 1! 2! 3! 4! thing but when you use it 3 or four times it just screams “I’m too lazy to make a good transition”. I loved the open hi hat effect on sheet 5. Ending was too abrupt. Don’t request your own song to be featured, it sorta sounds all braggy. Work on this for more than 4 hours.
3.5/5
kay… 
Aliens… you may have worked hard… and it sounds pretty good… but 4 hours is way to short a time…
Okay.
but 4/5… That’s not a bad score.