Haiku

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#21

Boo.

#22

First there will be five,
then there will be seven more,
Then it’s five again

#23

Five, seven, then five / syllables mark a haiku / Remarkable oaf.

#24

Spanish haikus
Tus dedos encontrando
aletas para buscar aquĂ­
viento, lleno de palabras.

Olvidando tu nombre
para saber lo que no sé
un triunfo real.

Leo el gesto
te promito algo bueno
pero no lo tengo.

Las ĂĄguilas vuelen
el vuelo silencioso y sabemos
el dolor de esclavitud.

Anoche encontré la llave
estuvo en tu cama, pienso
que encontraré la ranura, pronto.

CĂłmala, la dulce
un regalito del sol
este dĂ­a completo.

#25

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#26

tickle my anus
and you call me Samantha,
non-touhou you post!

#27

I saw this on Coca- Cola’s page on Facebook:

#28

If they left out the s at the end it would sound more correct and rhyme.

#29

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#30

Yes, yes! So much yes. | I have liked your comment, Leife. | For it was awesome/

#31

You’ll maybe want to
Remove a word from line two
Since it’s eight, not seven

#32

Yes, yes! So much yes. | I have liked your comment, Leif. | For it was awesome

There you go Leife, | For I have removed an “e.” | Hope you now enjoy.

#33

Trevor is my name
I make really sucky songs
But some are good though

#34

hey bobby play that
one about falling down the
stairs. sure thing johnny

Help me i’m being
robbed! I’ll save you! tree
powers activate!

#35

You screwed up, you know.
The first had eight syllables
in the second line.

As well as that fail,
The second had only five
in its second line.

#36

Five seven five seven five
Five seven five seven five seven five
I don’t write haiku

#37

I can tell you don’t.
Once more, not words. Syllables.
Can’t people get that?

#38

Are you sure 'bout that?
I count seven in that line
Ba dum dee ba do

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#39

Nuse IS correct, doc.
There were seven syllables
in that second line.

#40

Herp a Derp. My bad.
In my haste, I miscounted.
Shan’t occur again.

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