I listened to Carrot’s advice. He said: I don’t like the white snare, sorry i just don’t like it. So i blamed the white snare & in measure 30 i made a fast arpeggio for harpsichord,steel drums & marimba. (that was UPGRADE 2)
If you have another criticism for me on this (now still work in progress) song, tell it in the comments & i’ll listen to it.