on the moon’s progression is good i think
so i stole it
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one big problem that i now notice (especially with the player actually being quite different from the render option) is that the volume changes too abruptly. That will be fixed.
you took out the toms…meh I suppose it’s a pretty good choice overall (snare might be a bit lonely now though). Could really go for some really cool marching kick lines like Some Nights to give the song some more solidity in rhythm. Up to you though 
It probably would have been better to half the speed of the toms.