is this any better, or should I give up on this song? by still can't compose

Songs
#1

I’m stuck and can’t do anything else with this.

2 Likes
#2

try separating the voxes into a empty sheet and tweaking them around a bit to make a more recognizable pattern
the chord change between measures 4 and 5 seems a little weird to me

otherwise, just keep on trying new things cause this has the potential to grow